

Regarding the narration, I would love for more writers of reverse harem to start writing chapters to include the male POV (narrated by a male) or at least allow for a male narrator to narrate the speaking parts for the heroes. Other than that, it is an interesting series and leaves me wanting to know what happens next.

I keep thinking of the characters as college age so I don’t get creeped out. Third, I’m struggling with the ages of the characters because I’m ready for the slow burn to heat up yet when I think of their actual ages, it makes me cringe. Secondly, while I love people that don’t necessarily know just how beautiful they are, this heroine is killing me with her density. Sometimes far-fetched bothers me more or less. First of all, this series is just so far out of the realm of possibility, that it’s more than a tad frustrating. The cliffhanger definitely pulls you in! But I do have some issues to discuss. And I plan to purchase the next installment. Ok, I’ve obviously liked this series enough to continue to book two.

Really Good So Far with Some Minor Drawbacks
